1. Overall, a good message. However….

    < Synthetic opiates like lortabs are basically (sic) heroin >

    Holy crap, that is horrible dialogue! That awful 'b-word' should be deleted to hell and back. Lortabs are similar to * heroin; they're a *stepping stone to heroin, they're in the same drug class as heroin – anything besides the overused & meaningless b-word.

    Animation & narrative move a bit too quickly as well, it's overstimulating.

    Need more details on disposing of unused meds properly – This DOESN'T include flushing them down the toilet; that is horrible for aquatic life & causing genetic mutations in fish.

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